Good work.
For #3 I'd say something more general about waiting to be led, and not anticipating. I'd maybe also clarify the tension thing to say you should *match* the tension of your partner, but perhaps that's too subtle for beginners... Also, it's not just guys who yank.
In #5, maybe you should say something like "ladies, please be patient while the men master the new moves they've just been taught."
I've soften #7 to "You should accept any offer of a dance unless you have a good reason", and drop the "very" from the second sentence.
Um... That's all I can think of at the moment.
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