Two tracks out of three
(I think some of you can see where I'm going with this... )
Just didn't know what songs to pickOriginally Posted by David Franklin
Two tracks out of three
(I think some of you can see where I'm going with this... )
lacks dance-ability..........
He played CALL ON ME
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"If you're going to do something tonight, that you know you'll be sorry for in the morning, plan a lie in." Lorraine
I won't dance if I look like a pr**k!
(Go on, somebody had to do it, and I'm not in a subtle mood!)
Greg
So you get to start the next one (unsubtle or not!)Originally Posted by Sheepman
Oh Lory, you sneaked in there while I wasn't looking, and messed up my line, but I should have checked, I couldn't finish it as it was only the fourth line. I'll go away and hide again now ...
Greg
Maybe you should start a new one anyway before everyone gets confused
S. x
OK.Originally Posted by Feelingpink
Erm, ...
A strikingly tall young copper,
Had a slippery wife, and would drop her
She'd kick and she'd scream,
until he came on his knees...........
Then he woke up - 'twas a dream
can someone confirm number of lines and rhyming pattern for me please.
I thought it was:
A
A
B
B
A
ie 5 lines, 1, 2 and 5 rhyming and 3 and 4 rhyming...
...I'm so confused now...
You're right ... but there was two of us posting at almost the same time (posting line 4 allegedly, but since when has knees rhymed with scream?) Does that make sense Princess?Originally Posted by Sparkles
OK, so we still need a fifth line rhyming with 'copper' and then we're done, yes?
Originally Posted by Sparkles
oops soory didn know......
Exactly. And if you finish it, you get to start the next.Originally Posted by Sparkles
A charming and queenly young demo,Originally Posted by Sparkles
Said 'Limericks? How to do them? Oh!'
She's very confused
So I'll lift her blues
And offer the following memo:
It is AABBA, correct.
And the scanning should, as a rule of thumb, be:
Line 1: 9 syllables
Line 2: 9 syllables
Line 3: 5 syllables
Line 4: 5 syllables
Line 5: 9 syllables
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