Again, Diana, thank you for your words and your thoughts. I appreciate you taking the time to read this enough to formulate a response.
'I hope a cancer eats your soul
No death too slow or painful, I hope you rot in a hell hole'
... sums up what I feel would be "natural justice." What I am NOT saying, though, is, "I am going to beat 7 shades of jobey out of you," or anything such like. Yes, I'm expressing an anger, a contempt and probably a complete ignorance and lack of understanding.
'My blood boils, you make me hurl'
... is a particularly weak line. Was best I could do under the rhyming pattern, but is probably the first candidate for change.
I deliberitely used some "violent" terms and the word "c**t" to get over the point how distasteful the act/perpetrator is. (I know is a tad on the overstating the obvious side) Again, some of it is working out some of my own disgust.
I fully take on board your comments and await to see what others feel.
However, I shall forewarn punters at a live show (with context) and also put a warning on our website AND CD sleeve where the lyrics will be typed out.
Thank you, again: I really do appreciate it.
(and anyway, when we getting a dance, woman?!?!?!?!!?!
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