are you ok there vegetable ???
PS: may be you shoud stop messing with your girlfriend.
Enjoy
He sat there eagerly, with the light slightly dimmed, with crimson red rose petals scattered upon the floor, music quietly playing in the background, he begins to hear the faint sound of her delicate footsteps as she begins to approach the door, as the door handle starts to move, his heart begins to race the closer she approaches the louder his heart beats, the door opens and he cant hold his lust for her any more, he stands and begins to approach, he puts his arm upon her shoulder gently pulls her towards him and he can feel her warm breath upon his face, he firmly pushes his lips against hers, as he moves his body closer, she reaches her arm around his back slowly moving it up along his back as he begins to shiver, he begins to feel a cold rush, as the blunt kitchen knife tears through his tender skin the warm blood runs down her arm, a slight felling of sorrow fills her body for a man she once loved, a faint smile as she leaves his body draped in blood on the silk that covers the bed, where she spent nights in his arms then looking at the bed begins to prove her anger as she lashes out reaching for picture of her in his arm, the glass smashes as if in slow motion begins to hit the floor, leaving the room she trips over the table, the burning candle falls onto the bed where he lies silently, she walks down the cold dark streets to look back to see the flames rushing into the sky, sheds one last tear turns towards the darkness of her soul and walks off into the night...
Last edited by Vegetable; 12th-September-2007 at 02:20 PM.
are you ok there vegetable ???
PS: may be you shoud stop messing with your girlfriend.
Yeh i got bored so i felt the need 2 write a poem
You never come dancing here - I was starting to take it personally. And we sometimes get the Jive Aces on a Thursday night if that could tept you
And Shoreham recently came high up in a survey about the best places to live. Or was that the best place to buy hallucinogenic drugs - well, it was one of the two
Lol i thought my poem was kool, i guess not......
I liked it - I also liked that you had the guts to post something publicly, despite the abuse you got from the cheap seats.
There's a specific thread for this, however:
http://www.cerocscotland.com/forum/c...iters-etc.html
- maybe you could re-post it there?
yeah, text speak, I get it now, but hey ho, there's only so many languages one can understand
At first it really didn't make any sense I'm afraid. And when my little sister sends me a text in a similar vein that I don't understand, I ask her to spell it out properly. Youngsters, these days
ha come on this isn't abuse, just a bit of fun
you're not taking this badly vegetable, are you ?
clearly the man needs to be locked up
I know what you mean. But text speak isn't a language; more of a virus that infects another language.
There's no reason to use it where you a) have the use of a full keyboard and b) are not restricted as to how many characters you can use, since the ambiguities make for slower reading and problematic comprehension.
"I have no one. I am allowed to call my girlfriend."
"I have no one I am allowed to call 'my girlfriend'."
QED
my internet grammer is very poor, i spend most of my time replying to stuff fast, and full stops, commers, spellings and so on waste my time.. so i get lazy
That would be translated as....
My internet grammar is very poor. I spend most of my time replying to other posts as quickly as I can. I find that full stops, commas, spelling and so on waste my time and I get lazy.....
this would then be translated as......
Can't be bothered to reply properly - I'm lazy...
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