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    Bored, I wrote a poem

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    He sat there eagerly, with the light slightly dimmed, with crimson red rose petals scattered upon the floor, music quietly playing in the background, he begins to hear the faint sound of her delicate footsteps as she begins to approach the door, as the door handle starts to move, his heart begins to race the closer she approaches the louder his heart beats, the door opens and he cant hold his lust for her any more, he stands and begins to approach, he puts his arm upon her shoulder gently pulls her towards him and he can feel her warm breath upon his face, he firmly pushes his lips against hers, as he moves his body closer, she reaches her arm around his back slowly moving it up along his back as he begins to shiver, he begins to feel a cold rush, as the blunt kitchen knife tears through his tender skin the warm blood runs down her arm, a slight felling of sorrow fills her body for a man she once loved, a faint smile as she leaves his body draped in blood on the silk that covers the bed, where she spent nights in his arms then looking at the bed begins to prove her anger as she lashes out reaching for picture of her in his arm, the glass smashes as if in slow motion begins to hit the floor, leaving the room she trips over the table, the burning candle falls onto the bed where he lies silently, she walks down the cold dark streets to look back to see the flames rushing into the sky, sheds one last tear turns towards the darkness of her soul and walks off into the night...
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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem



    are you ok there vegetable ???


    PS: may be you shoud stop messing with your girlfriend.

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Yeh i got bored so i felt the need 2 write a poem

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Vegetable View Post
    Yeh i got bored so i felt the need 2 write a poem
    So, Shoreham, eh? <Thinks: won't be dancing there in a hurry...>

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Barry Shnikov View Post
    So, Shoreham, eh? <Thinks: won't be dancing there in a hurry...>
    You never come dancing here - I was starting to take it personally. And we sometimes get the Jive Aces on a Thursday night if that could tept you

    And Shoreham recently came high up in a survey about the best places to live. Or was that the best place to buy hallucinogenic drugs - well, it was one of the two

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Lol i thought my poem was kool, i guess not......

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post


    are you ok there vegetable ???

    PS: may be you shoud stop messing with your girlfriend.
    And here's me thinking the poem was about the secret dreams of your boiler...

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post

    PS: may be you shoud stop messing with your girlfriend.
    this makes very little sense 2 me as i have no 1 i am aloud 2 call my g.f

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Vegetable View Post
    i have no 1 i am aloud 2 call my g.f
    I think that might have something to do with the restraining order.

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by straycat264 View Post
    And here's me thinking the poem was about the secret dreams of your boiler...
    You think all Georges wants is a deep stab with a kitchen knife, and bleed gas to death ?

    And here was I, all innocent as usual, thinking he's just teasing me a little... when he may in fact want to kill both of us

    dangerous stuff, boilers...

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Vegetable View Post
    this makes very little sense 2 me as i have no 1 i am aloud 2 call my g.f

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post
    dangerous stuff, boilers...
    Aye - well - it's said they'll sometimes e x p l o d e under pressure....

    If only you'd paid more attention to him when it would have made a difference, instead of taking him for granted until it was too late....

    Not that I'm trying to worry you or anything

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by straycat264 View Post
    Aye - well - it's said they'll sometimes e x p l o d e under pressure....

    If only you'd paid more attention to him when it would have made a difference, instead of taking him for granted until it was too late....

    Not that I'm trying to worry you or anything
    genrally id find it very reasuring, the thought of my boiler blowing up!

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Vegetable View Post
    Lol i thought my poem was kool, i guess not......
    I liked it - I also liked that you had the guts to post something publicly, despite the abuse you got from the cheap seats.

    There's a specific thread for this, however:
    http://www.cerocscotland.com/forum/c...iters-etc.html
    - maybe you could re-post it there?

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by straycat264 View Post
    yeah, text speak, I get it now, but hey ho, there's only so many languages one can understand
    At first it really didn't make any sense I'm afraid. And when my little sister sends me a text in a similar vein that I don't understand, I ask her to spell it out properly. Youngsters, these days

    Quote Originally Posted by DavidJames View Post
    I liked it - I also liked that you had the guts to post something publicly, despite the abuse you got from the cheap seats.
    ha come on this isn't abuse, just a bit of fun
    you're not taking this badly vegetable, are you ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Vegetable View Post
    genrally id find it very reasuring, the thought of my boiler blowing up!
    clearly the man needs to be locked up

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post
    yeah, text speak, I get it now, but hey ho, there's only so many languages one can understand
    I know what you mean. But text speak isn't a language; more of a virus that infects another language.

    There's no reason to use it where you a) have the use of a full keyboard and b) are not restricted as to how many characters you can use, since the ambiguities make for slower reading and problematic comprehension.

    "I have no one. I am allowed to call my girlfriend."

    "I have no one I am allowed to call 'my girlfriend'."

    QED

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    my internet grammer is very poor, i spend most of my time replying to stuff fast, and full stops, commers, spellings and so on waste my time.. so i get lazy

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Vegetable View Post
    my internet grammer is very poor, i spend most of my time replying to stuff fast, and full stops, commers, spellings and so on waste my time.. so i get lazy
    fair enough... but in the same way you might find some people may get lazy when it comes to reading / deciphering you though

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    Re: Bored, I wrote a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Vegetable View Post
    my internet grammer is very poor, i spend most of my time replying to stuff fast, and full stops, commers, spellings and so on waste my time.. so i get lazy
    That would be translated as....

    My internet grammar is very poor. I spend most of my time replying to other posts as quickly as I can. I find that full stops, commas, spelling and so on waste my time and I get lazy.....

    this would then be translated as......

    Can't be bothered to reply properly - I'm lazy...

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