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    Re: Send me some luuurve!!!

    Ok, here are the 5 criterias I am using to 'score':
    - suitability (i.e. can I use it in the situation I described)
    - love factor
    - laugh factor
    - 'Literature' quality
    - Originality

    All the criteria carry an equal weight.

    I can already say that there is one entry that has exceeded all the others by a very short margin.
    I can also say that it ain't Robd or Baruch (feel free to try again )

    The winner will be anounced (there will be an official ceremony of course, champagne, caviar and VIPs) next monday 30/11 (still plenty of time to submit your entry ).

    I am open to suggestions as for the prize...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post
    I am open to suggestions as for the prize...
    There is only one prize that could do justice to this superb thread, one prize that could compensate for the hours of hard work and painstaking heartache and thought that has gone into the entries, one prize that could possibly be suitable, fit for a king............

    You, Caro

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    Quote Originally Posted by Blueshoes View Post
    There is only one prize that could do justice to this superb thread, one prize that could compensate for the hours of hard work and painstaking heartache and thought that has gone into the entries, one prize that could possibly be suitable, fit for a king............

    You, Caro
    Guess I'd better get an entry in then...

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    My Darling Caro,

    I try to smile and pretend that everything is fine, but I fail miserably. I miss you so much. Since you left I have barely slept, and my heart is full of sorrow. I can't get you and our love out of my mind. Maybe this sounds soppy, but you're so special to me that I am completely useless without you. There is a great big ache in my heart that constanly reminds me your sweet love. Give me a call and let me know you're still thinking about me. I can't bear another day without hearing your sweet voice.

    All my love always

    Taz x x x x x

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    Re: Send me some luuurve!!!

    Was going to post the Lyrics to this song I was listening to on my MP3 player this morning.. But I already have

    I thought it apt for this thread.

    See THIS POST

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    Quote Originally Posted by Blueshoes View Post
    There is only one prize that could do justice to this superb thread, one prize that could compensate for the hours of hard work and painstaking heartache and thought that has gone into the entries, one prize that could possibly be suitable, fit for a king............


    Quote Originally Posted by Blueshoes View Post
    You, Caro
    *falls off chair*


    I knew somebody was going to say that

    You know what? I've had the most fun reading those letters and it certainly made my days last week - have been laughing like mad in my little office - so.... I agree. In the limit of decency obviously, but the winner can choose what he wants... and that could (see, could, not should or must ) be something to do with me (let's not turn this into a TKD though... there's a reason I don't post on that thread.... I'm a shy thing really ).

    Quote Originally Posted by Rhythm King View Post
    Guess I'd better get an entry in then...
    you have a few days left...

    Quote Originally Posted by Beowulf1970 View Post
    Was going to post the Lyrics to this song I was listening to on my MP3 player this morning.. But I already have

    I thought it apt for this thread.

    See THIS POST
    yes Beo you can and even

    I think this is the ONLY song that I would feel awkward (as in ) to dance to because of the lyrics...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post
    I agree. In the limit of decency obviously, but the winner can choose what he wants... and that could (see, could, not should or must ) be something to do with me
    Hmm.. Something to do with you? I have an idea..

    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post
    I think this is the ONLY song that I would feel awkward (as in ) to dance to because of the lyrics...
    So If I SHOULD win.. I think we should have that Bluesy dance you've been promising me.. I know this lovey French song by a guy called Serge that we could dance too

    Oui Je T'aime

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    My Dearest Caro,

    How are you doing? My thoughts seem to increasingly stray towards you with every day that passes. Since you've been gone I see more and more things that remind me a little bit of you:
    ...Someone walking away that's just the right height, but her hair does not have the same sheen as yours...A glimpse of someone sitting in a café window who has the same shaped face, but her features cannot match your beauty...The eyes of the girl who gave me change were a close match to your colour, but held none of the sparkle and life of yours...An overheard laughter that has the right pitch, but none of the warmth...the curve of neck without the perfection of skin... the line of lips without the smile or colour... the shape of legs without the poise... the touch without feeling...
    You seem to be everywhere and in everyone in tiny fragments when all I desire is to have them all the perfect pieces, all in the perfect you, standing right in-front of me.

    My day seems incomplete without your company to share it with. My mornings are desolately lonely in your absence; my evenings I fill with noise to drown out your echoes; my nights, when all is quiet, when you're not there to hold, when you're not there to share my day with, whn you're not there to tell me your day's dramas, when I count down the seconds until you return...the nights are the times when my soul reaches across the distance between us and tortures me with your ghost.

    Until you return I can only dream; to wake each morning from dreams of warmth to the cold reality of your absence. I miss you.

    I'll blow you a kiss and let the gods of the air carry it to you - when you feel that gentle breeze on your skin, know it may have been my lips that sent it with love.

    Gadget

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    Well well well.... all I can say after reading this thread is, I think my lunch looks better on the way down huh! nah just kiddin.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gadget View Post
    Thought I would stick to dancing, but if you are looking for a more romantic version I can turn my attention to other things
    Ok I for one would like to see the romantic version

    I also reckon that regardless of which letter Caro choses, your dance poem makes a good companion to it. (Look he loves me sooooooooo much he not only wrote me a letter, but poetry too )

    Quote Originally Posted by Gadget View Post
    { it was spaced nicely - look at the code}
    Try putting in an "o" in white font to get the spacing right

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    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post
    The winner will be anounced (there will be an official ceremony of course, champagne, caviar and VIPs) next monday 30/11
    Caviar - check
    Champagne - check
    Strawberries - check
    VIPs - check
    Chocolate cake - check ( I can have everything in my ceremony, no?)

    *Drum rolls*


    Ladies and Gentlemen,


    I am very proud to announce that we have a winner for this year Caro's Love Letter Competition...
    One whose talent is only matched by his bravery,
    One who marries words better than Shakespeare,
    One whose dancing is as predictable as his spelling,

    The only, the unique

    Gadget




    *the audience burst in continuous applause, women faint, children scream, men cry*

    Gadget... I never thought I would say that (no offence ;-)), I'm yours ...

    and your priz(c!)e will be?

    ...be nice, remember, I'm a shy thing!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post
    Caviar - check
    Champagne - check
    Strawberries - check
    VIPs - check
    Chocolate cake - check ( I can have everything in my ceremony, no?)

    *Drum rolls*


    Ladies and Gentlemen,


    I am very proud to announce that we have a winner for this year Caro's Love Letter Competition...
    One whose talent is only matched by his bravery,
    One who marries words better than Shakespeare,
    One whose dancing is as predictable as his spelling,

    The only, the unique

    Gadget




    *the audience burst in continuous applause, women faint, children scream, men cry*

    Gadget... I never thought I would say that (no offence ;-)), I'm yours ...

    and your priz(c!)e will be?

    ...be nice, remember, I'm a shy thing!



    and I was sooo sincere

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    And I was just finishing off another poem... oh well - need to wait for someone else who is worthy of the parise... perhaps next year

    My prize? How can I ask for anything more than a dance?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tazmanian Devil View Post
    Sorry Taz but competition was really fierce.... but you scored well

    Quote Originally Posted by Gadget View Post
    And I was just finishing off another poem... oh well - need to wait for someone else who is worthy of the parise... perhaps next year
    :
    May be I'm worthy of 2 poems ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Gadget View Post
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    My prize? How can I ask for anything more than a dance?
    Well that should be easy... if you're patient!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post
    Sorry Taz but competition was really fierce.... but you scored well

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    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post
    May be I'm worthy of 2 poems ?
    Only two, my lady? You are worthy of more poems than exist or ever will exist; how can simple words convey such a beauty to grace our presence? {}

    well, OK then...how's this:


    To my Caro, although you may dream from far away,
    __ we meet each night to depart at day;
    We look at the same stars and somehow you're nearer,
    __ the crisp bright moon is somehow clearer.

    In the darkness, sprinkled with points of starlight,
    __ I see drawn by the gods a wondrous sight;
    Blackness, textured and formed by the eye,
    __ pictures of you filling up the night sky.

    Cloud rends the moon from the heavens up above,
    __ it's glamour disappearing - tearing like the loss of love;
    But it's light will return to brighten the night air,
    __ and you will return: a beauty far more fair.

    And with that breath of your coming back to my arms,
    __ a cool duvet awaits, devoid of your charms;
    An empty hollow of memories, smoothed by sheets,
    __ awaiting once more to be rumpled by treats.

    Your scent on the pillow may have gone with the wash,
    __ skins of clothes now folded that were strewn in a flash;
    I'm waiting to breath your hair as it rests by my face,
    __ waiting to shed, unzip, unbuckle, unlace.

    The softest flesh, lightest touch, all fill my senses up-
    __ you are the most precious wine which I will ever supp.
    My last though before I descend and am pulled into bliss,
    __ is the taste of your lips the next time that we kiss.

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    Well done Gadget !


    Quote Originally Posted by Gadget View Post
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    Your scent on the pillow may have gone with the wash,
    ...
    I can't believe you washed the sheets ... that's not much dedication... I haven't washed AT ALL.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Caro View Post
    Well done Gadget !




    I can't believe you washed the sheets ... that's not much dedication... I haven't washed AT ALL.

    Dear smelly, our date is cancelled

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gadget View Post
    And I was just finishing off another poem... oh well - need to wait for someone else who is worthy of the parise... perhaps next year
    :

    me! me! im feeling lonely too over here in singapore all on my lonesome!
    o could benefit from some of this happy feeling you've been spreading lately!!

    C xx

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    Quote Originally Posted by cms View Post
    me! me! im feeling lonely too over here in singapore all on my lonesome!
    o could benefit from some of this happy feeling you've been spreading lately!!
    OK,. so you're now in Oz; this has been sitting waiting to be finished for a while; I thought I would finish it off and send some lorve...

    It is Caro's thread, but I'm sure the radiance of such an angel of desire would not diminish if the focus was turned to your perfections for a few verses

    Though your feet may carry you
    __ from places that you've been;
    Though your eyes may look upon
    __ sights that are seldom seen;
    Though your thoughts may dwell
    __ on where the sun will set,
    Know my thoughts will dwell
    __ on the times when we met.

    Your feet have carried you
    __ across the floor to me;
    And we have taken steps
    __ to dancing ecstasy;
    Each time we graced the floor
    __ we shone like bright new stars;
    Everyone just disappeared
    __ we could have been on mars.

    Your eyes have glinted brightly
    __ with secret smiles for me;
    While we feel the music through us
    __ the rhythm won't let us be.
    The devil moves our bodies
    __ while angels move our soul;
    The music flows between us
    __ to make our two halves whole.

    Your thoughts have been with me
    __ every time that we have danced,
    We move through the music
    __ into space that's barely glanced.
    My thoughts have been with you
    __ in every motion that you make;
    Our bodies linked with senses
    __ feeling every breath that we take.

    Though your feet may carry you
    __ across my hidden dream;
    Though my eyes may look to you
    __ with a hungry glean;
    Though your thoughts may not linger
    __ on the times when we met,
    Know my thoughts will dwell there
    __ until the sun has set.

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